）有一篇关于西红柿炒鸡蛋过程的英文介绍,请大家看看.,Put the eggs in a bowl,using chopsticks to egg mixture,and add the salt,pepper powder.2 tablespoons of oil heat,into the egg,with a spatula gently rolling,and cut into small fast.And then picked up the spareHeat oil,add the tomatoes,sugar and water,cook for 30 seconds.The eggs,chopped green onion into the pot,stir fry for 30 seconds,You can eat delicious tomatoes scrambled eggs.我要去参加比赛,看看有没有什么问题,最好能改简单点,改好了绝对加分!

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Firstly, put the eggs into a bowl and stir them with the chopsticks. Do remember to add some salt and pepper.
Secondly, heat 2 tablespoons of oil and pour in the eggs, then quickly but gently stir with a spatula cutting the eggs into small pieces. and then Pick out the spares.
Finally, heat some oil and put the tomatoes into the pan with some sugar and water. After 30 seconds, put in the eggs and chopped green onion into the pan and stir fry for 30 seconds.
and now you have the delicious homemade tomatoes scrambled eggs.
六年级能写成这样挺不错啊

Firstly, put the eggs into a bowl and mixture them with the chopsticks. Do remember to add some salt and pepper powder.
Secondly, heat 2 tablespoons of oil and put the eggs in, then gently roll with a spatula and cut the eggs into small pieces quickly. Pick out the spares.
Finally, heat some oil and put the tomatoes into the pan with some sugar and water. After 30 seconds, put the eggs and chopped green onion into the pan and stir fry together for 30 second.
Here, you can eat the delicious homemade tomatoes scrambled eggs.

Put the eggs in a bowl,use chopsticks to mixthe egg up.Then add the salt and some pepper powder.put the egg into the pot,with a spatula gently rolling.And cut it into small pieces.And then picked up t...