英语翻译The attachment is one gear box of our new project,can you please have a look and welcome your comments in the design improvement,and that includes:1.The worm and the gear materials.2.The gear housing materials.3.The basic-design data of the worm and the gear

The attachment is one gear box of our new project, can you please take a glance？Meanwhile you are welcomed to give me your comments in design improvement that may include:
1. the worm and the gear materials
2. the gear housing materials
3. the basic-design data of the worm and gear
你的表达的应该没什么大问题，只是有点口语化，而且整个断句也不是很好，我帮你改了一下。
中文意思：附件是我们新项目的一个齿轮箱，您是否可以看看？同时，欢迎您对设计改善方面提出建议，这些建议可以涵盖：
1. 螺旋管和齿轮的材料
2. 齿壳的材料
3. 螺旋管和齿轮的基本设计数据

The attachment is a gear box of our new project, and we are looking forward to your comments on the products design improvements, including:
1.The worm and the gear materials.
2.The gear housing materials.
3.The basic-design data of the worm and the gear

The attachment is our new project,a gear box.Please have a look.We are looking forward to your comments for design improvement.That includes:1.The worm and the gear materials.2.The gear housing materi...