一篇英语作文My day 一定要初一水平一定要单词表里的词

列一下好么..

My day
Today was Sunday and I was very happy!In the morning,I stayed at home to do my homework and watch TV.In the afternoon,I went to a park with my best friends.There were many flowers, and some birds were singing songs.We played games and talked about our dreams.At last,we went home for dinner.Today, I had a great time!
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译文：
我的一天
今天是星期天，我非常高兴！早上，我呆在家里做作业看电视。下午，我和我最好的朋友去了公园。这里有许多花儿，一些鸟还在唱歌呢、我们一起玩游戏，谈论我们的梦想。最后，我们就回家吃晚饭了。今天玩的真的很开心！
文章为过去时态，is过去式was are过去式为were dream 梦想（很简单的）
文章很简单，词数语法满足初一所需，是适合初一上学期的学生的！
有什么意见或建议希望提出，谢谢！

My day Hello,everyone.My name isxxxxx.I am studying in xxschool.l am a top student.l get at 8:00a.m.every morning.l usually eat bread and egg for breakfast.After that,l go to school on foot.Then l have class.l usually have lunch at 12:00a.m.l have four lessons in the afternoon.After school,l walk home.l do my homework at home.l have supper at 8:00p.m.Then l go to bed at 8:30p.m.
只能这样了,求最佳.

Today is Friday. It is my thirteenth birthday. I got up very early in the morning and put on my new clothes happily. My parents bought me the new clothes as my birthday presents. I went to school earlier than before. I invited many of my classmates to come to my birthday party in the evening. Evening came at last. Many of my classmate came to my home. They bought me lots of beautiful presents. They all said,"Happy birthday to you!" We sang birthday songs happily.Then my parents brought out a big birthday cake, saying, "We love you for ever. Happy birthday!" At the end of the party, we ate the birthday cake and some other delicious food. How happy I was!
自己修改几个单词 或意思