请教一句话
问题描述：
请教一句话
大意是“我们已经更换了图5,新图中包含了两个模型的优化拟合,而这两个模型有着不同的施主分布”
We have replaced Fig. 5 with a new one in which the optimized fits of the two models with different donor distributions were included.
请老师帮我看看这句话结构有没有问题,还有就是 were included这个时态对不对.分不多,感激涕零.
答
We have replaced Fig. 5 with a new one in which the optimized fitting results for two models having different donor distributions are included.
fit作名词很少表示拟合,所以采用fitting results
with different donor distributions在语法上没有错,不过with含义比较多,建议用明确含义的having
描述图中情况时,可以简单地使用一般现在式,are,不必用过去式.