I'd like to introduce my friends Li Lei to you.He's going to apply for a position in your company.

I'd like to introduce my friends Li Lei to you.He's going to apply for a position in your company.
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He was graduated from Shanghai University three years ago since then she has worked as a salesman.
He speaks English fluent and knows some Japanese and German.He work very hard and always try his best to do everything that he does.He is honest,kind but easy to get along.He was born on Augustst,in Shangdong Province.If he was accepted,I'm sure he willbe fit for a poshtion.Looj forward to your early reply.共10处错误，麻烦写下错的地方 和改正后单词，