急,求英语高手,短文改错

急,求英语高手,短文改错
Have you ever been bored with the busy life in the city If so ,have glimpse of the primary forest with me .The breathtaking scenery make you forget everything when you are exploring what the forest has to offer .With thousands of trees surrounded you .You will feel like to floating on the green ocean .Under the leaves are all kinds of flowers .Peacefully and shy .And a variety of birds were singing happily in the trees .While you are enjoying the scenery on the ground .Watching out for the sky .It will give your eye a feast .Wandering alone in the forest .We will have the feeling of returning to nature .一共有十个错误.