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The power of Luck.
Luck,an abstract thing.It will make everything good.
If you got this ,you would succeed in everything you did.
But luck just like a bird ,you can't find it easily.
Einstein ever said :Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.
But there was a problem Einstein didn't find.
That was luck.
A lot of successful men will be successful in their businesses,families,and grades cuz they had good moments ,good situations ,and good friends.
All these good things were luck!
To catch luck is impossible.
If you feel it is stayed by your side.Don't use it to do some stupid thing likes gamble.To buy a lottery is enough for you.
Cuz you will become nothing soon.
I think the luck isn't too hard to get.Trying to make a good mood in all day and you would feel everything is so fine.With a good manner to everybody.
Everything you felt was difficult to do and just become a piece of cake now.Good mood is very important.If you think you aren't a lucky guy.
Trying to make efforts and trying to make kindnesses to everyone.
Guys ,you know.I always hope I have a lucky goddess and she will always stay by my side.

The power of Luck.Luck, an abstract thing, will make everything good. (一句话中不可无谓语,因此用同位语的形式合并这两句话.)If it hit on you,you would succeed in everything you did. (LUCK不是每时每刻...