这段英语有语法,I evalue my account budget and find I'm short of money.I'm in great need of it.My mother has realized my financial embarrassment.And it's true.But I believe I'll get over it if I have found a job.It's very necessary.So I am hunting for a job immediately.My father adviced me to work as a bank clerk first.Due to my present situation,I'll find a job to earn money as soon as possible.除此之外,再问下“account budget ”是专有名词吗?可以这样用吗?"I budget my financial ca

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i evalue my account budget and find I'm short of money.I'm in great need of it.My mother has realized my financial embarrassment. And it's true. But I believe I'll get it over if I find a job.It's very necessary.So I am hunting for a job as quickly as possible.My father advised me to work as a bank clerk first.Due to my present situation, I'll find a job to earn money as soon as possible.

evalue这个词汇我没看懂。account budget你是要表达什么，不是专有名词。
But i believe i will get over it, if i find a job.但我相信如果我找到工作，我就会克服这个难关。
It's very necessary.在文中有点突兀，也没表达清楚很有必要做什么，使文变得不连贯了。
So I am hunting for a job immediately.这句的immediately应该去掉。So I am hunting for a job。所以我正在寻找一份工作。
I make a budget of my financial condition.我预算了下我的经济情况。

当然有.日前不是已经帮你解决了类似问题了吗?还要写另一篇?
没有“account budget ”这个词,
最后一句可改为：I planned my budget in view of my financial situation.
全文可改为：When I did my own budgetary evaluation,I found I'm short of money.I'm in great need of it,in fact.My mother has realized my financial embarrassment.And it's true.But I believe I'll get over it if I can find a job.It's very necessary.So I am hunting for a job immediately.My father adviced me to work as a bank clerk first.Due to my present situation,I'll look for a job to earn money as soon as possible.