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My Lovely Cat
I have a cat.It’s a very lovely cat.It’s name is Mimi.It’s white and brown.It has two big eyes and a long white tail.It likes eating fish and mice.It is very clever.When I get home after school,Mimi runs to me with “Meow,meow”.Mimi always wags its tail and runs to me.I like playing with Mimi.It is my good friend.
Mimi brings me pleasure.

My Lovely CatI have a very lovely cat Mimi.It's a white and brown cat who has two big eyes and a long white tail.Fish and mice are its likes.In addition ,it's a clever cat.When I get home after school...