修改错误的句子,找出病因
问题描述：
修改错误的句子,找出病因
1、如果在家里闲着,就到图书馆看看书.
2、艳丽的朝阳,灿烂地放射出万丈光芒.
3、我让座给汽车上的一位老大爷.
答
你看着行不行吧～!
1.改为：与其在家里闲着,还不如到图书馆看看书.
2.改为：艳丽的朝阳,放射出万丈灿烂的光芒.
3.改为：我在汽车上让座给一位老大爷.
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