您的位置: 首页  >  作业答案  >  英语  >  我写的一篇英语作文,帮我看看(本人初三)哪里写的不好一篇考场作文,要你对一个电台举办的活动提一些建议,说明你何时能来说明理由,并挑选你喜欢的两个项目,说明理由满分15I prefer to join the English corner and watch English movies.These two activities ,which are held by your TV station,are both interesting and educational.Besides,they can also help us improve our English speaking skills.I will join your activities from july 7th to july 17th,for i will have less homework than that i have now.As for the items you list,i think they can be

我写的一篇英语作文,帮我看看(本人初三)哪里写的不好一篇考场作文,要你对一个电台举办的活动提一些建议,说明你何时能来说明理由,并挑选你喜欢的两个项目,说明理由满分15I prefer to join the English corner and watch English movies.These two activities ,which are held by your TV station,are both interesting and educational.Besides,they can also help us improve our English speaking skills.I will join your activities from july 7th to july 17th,for i will have less homework than that i have now.As for the items you list,i think they can be

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我写的一篇英语作文,帮我看看(本人初三)哪里写的不好
一篇考场作文,要你对一个电台举办的活动提一些建议,说明你何时能来说明理由,并挑选你喜欢的两个项目,说明理由
满分15
I prefer to join the English corner and watch English movies.These two activities ,which are held by your TV station,are both interesting and educational.Besides,they can also help us improve our English speaking skills.
I will join your activities from july 7th to july 17th,for i will have less homework than that i have now.
As for the items you list,i think they can be more so that we can enjoy ourselves during the time we are in this activity.
Finally,i hope the activity will be successful!
Thank you very much.

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词数不够

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语法太多，不简练。写作文要长短句搭配，你全是长句，看得头晕。

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第二句中 好像有语法错误..还是 打错了啊..逗号..好多are both前要逗号是什么意思。月份是要大写.. 真的 课外来自阅读或是新颖的词汇 运用会很不错.
文章..运用了九年级的单词和定语从句..其实你还可以多用几个反义疑问句的说
毕竟是建议..然后 可能是因为 卷面 上的字有问题 是么..?这个会有影响..
卷子发下来..其他人的作文分是不是都不高呢?..
本人 初三..

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我七年级

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第一,语法错误 prefer to + sth/doing sth,所以应该是 I prefer to joining in the English corner and watching English movies.参加活动,一般要加介词in,所以join in your activities for i will have less homewo...

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