英语作文：描写暑假中难忘的一天怎么写?范文也行.小学六年级水平,80词左右.

an unforgetable day

during the summer holiday. i had an unforgetable day. i went camping with my family. we got up at 6.30and got everything ready.
we spent 1.5hours getting there. we parked the car and started to climb the mountain.when we reached at the top of the mountain.we were tired and hungry.so we set our tent and had something to eat. then, we went finishing by a lake. i got a big fish!
at about 4 o'clock p.m. .we went home.
anyway, we all had a good time


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An unforgettable day during Summer vacation
It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.
In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.
In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives helped people.

Summer day 暑假难忘的一天Today is the first day of summer vacation,so I am very happy,I got up very early in the morning.I had my breakfast,I intend to go to the mountains with my friends.In eight,my ...