英语作文(在线等)满意追加分
英语作文(在线等)满意追加分
Every culture enjoys an invaluable storage of proverbs which are rich in wisdom and profitable for people's everyday life.Chines culture happen to share lots of folk wisdom,as evidenced bu the following proverbs in both languages:
1.Good health is above wealth.健康胜过财富
2.He that travels far knows much.广游者,见识多
3.There are ups and downs in the lifetime.人生事业有盛有衰
4.Listen to the voice of experience,but also make use of your brain.要听经验之言,也要自己思考.
写作佳句及惯用表达】?
1.Wealth and health are what everybody longs for.财富和健康是每个人渴望得到的.
2.No one knows the value of health until he loses it.直到有病才知道健康的宝贵.
3.If you become sick,it is nearly impossible to pursue your career effectively,much less make your dreams come true.如果病了,有效地干事业几乎就不可能,更不用说使你梦想成真了.
4.When riches increase,the body decreases.(prov.)终生只恨积蓄少,待到多时眼闭了.
5.Some people have only one lifelong objective—to gain wealth even at the cost of their health.有些人一生只有一个目标——获取财富,甚至不惜身体健康.
6.Health is wealth.(prov.) 健康就是财富?
7.Health is better than wealth.(prov.) 健康胜于财富.
8.Wealth is nothing without health.(prov.) 失去健康,空有家当.
9.Health and wealth create beauty.(prov.) 健康和财富创造美.
10.He who has health has hope,and he who has hope has everything.(prov.) 有健康即有希望,有希望即有一切.
【写作范文】?
Some people believe that wealth can bring everything.And some people think that
health is above wealth.What is your opinion about it?
Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:
Wealth and Health?
Wealth and health are what everybody longs for.Some believe wealth means everything,thinking that with money they can get whatever they like.In order to make money,they are willing to do anything hard,humble,harmful,or even illegal.But the results usually turn out the opposite as they expected.
I think health is more important than wealth.Health is like the base of a building.Without good health,one cannot enjoy the pleasure brought by wealth.As a proverb goes,“ Health is above wealth.” It is true that one should be healthy first of all.If you are suffering from some disease,can you work energetically in your career?Money cannot buy health,but with good health,you can work hard to earn more money.
Therefore,you must keep healthy before you become wealthy.In order to be healthy,you should develop a good living habit and do physical exercise regularly.Remember the proverb “Health is not valued until sickness comes.”
【学习要点】?
① long for渴望得到?
② But the results usually turn out the opposite as they expected.结果往往事与愿违.
③ suffer from受…之苦,因…而不舒服；患（某种疾病）
【要点提示】?
⑴ 本文通过对比方法对“健康与财富”加以议论.文章首先举出认为财富更重要的观点,并举出事实说明受这种观念支配下的不良结果.然后作者引出与之对立观点：健康比财富更重要,接着用了六个扩展句作为论据,证明论点：健康比财富更重要.第一个论据是比喻.比喻是运用人们较熟悉而又容易?理解的具体事物,来论证人们较生疏、难懂的道理.把健康比做建筑物的基础,就把抽象的健康与具体的建筑物联系起来,从而使读者轻易理解健康与财富的关系.人们不难想象没有健康如同建筑物没有基础一样.扩展句⑥说明二者的关系.作者还用一格言作论据,因格言是人们总结的经验.文章结尾用一格言,告诫人们不要等得了病才珍惜健康.文章论证用词简洁,句子结构简单,表达清楚.
⑵ 关联词：But（表示对比）,First of all（首先）,Therefore（表示结论：因此）,In order to（为了）.
【模拟训练】?〔35 MIN.
Nowadays many people measure success by money.What is your opinion about this?
Write a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:
Can Success be Measured in Terms of Money Alone
You are to write in three paragraphs.
In the first paragraph,state your attitude.
In the second paragraph,state your reasons for your view.
In the last paragraph,bring what you have written to a natural conclusion.