《火影忍者》英文文章修改,要把这篇文章里的语法及其它错误都找出来,把修改过的文章告诉我.

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《火影忍者》英文文章修改,要把这篇文章里的语法及其它错误都找出来,把修改过的文章告诉我.
This is a ninja world.In the Naruto world,the ninja in this
profession are the children's dream!But this time the hero is Naruto.Small body seal the evil nine fox.He has no father and mother who suffered from the village of Naruto a cold shoulder.But he did not know why,all kinds of mischief he trying to attract everyone's attention has turned more people away from him.He was always laughing and joking.Naruto's dream is - to be the sixth generation of Huo Ying!For their own one day become Huoying,he's super-confident.To it,Naruto!
Naruto's partners from the beginning taken a dislike to each other,but with the common fight,and finally become a good partner.There are handsome sasuke and lovely girl Sakura,there are other groups’students,the story is very exciting!
修改后原文意思最好不要变哦!

This is a ninja world.In the Naruto world,the profession as a ninja is children's dream!But this time the hero is Naruto.Somebody sealed the evil fox with 9 tails in his body.Without father of mother,Naruto was cold-shouldered by the villag people.He did not know the reason for that,and all kinds of mischiefs by which he is trying to attract everyone's attention has only turned more people away from him.He is always laughing and joking.Naruto's dream is - to be the sixth generation of Huo Ying!Of his dream of becoming Huoying,he's super-confident.Go for it,Naruto!
Naruto's partners,including handsome sasuke and lovely girl Sakura,took a dislike to each other from the beginning.However,with fights together against their enemies,they finally became good partners.There are other groups’students,and the story is very exciting!
应该没有错误了