达人帮我看看这个句子的句法对不对?（英语）急.The recent two decades have seen an incrsasing emphasis on the debate whether senior people should embrace the newly-invented technology such as E-busness and E-newspaper.句子跟单词的错误?紧急.但是有没有这个用法呢 :"emphasis on the debate " 我提高悬赏了.
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达人帮我看看这个句子的句法对不对?（英语）急.
The recent two decades have seen an incrsasing emphasis on the debate whether senior people should embrace the newly-invented technology such as E-busness and E-newspaper.
句子跟单词的错误?紧急.
但是有没有这个用法呢 :"emphasis on the debate " 我提高悬赏了
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语法没问题。
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over the recent 2 decades we have seen an increased emphasis on the debate ....
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语法没有问题,而且写得不错,将recent two decades拟人化,不过emphasis on the debate这个说法就没见过了,用heat on the debate可能会比较好