请English高手帮忙修改一篇关于2008北京奥运的作文阿.本人语法错误可能比较多.望各位大人指出.I love the Olympic Games since I was a little girl.But this year.It has another meaning to me because the 29th Olympic Games are awarded to the city of Beijing in 2008.As a Chinese,Olympic means proud to me.China is a large country with a great deal of history .This is the first time for China to host the Olympic Games.That means China is becoming stronger and stronger in every hand.As a Chinese,Olymp

I have always dreamt of the Olympic Games since I was a little girl. But this year, it has another meaning to me because the 29th Olympic Games haaaas been awarded to the city of Beijing in 2008. As a Chinese, Olympic means proudness to me.
China is a large country with a long and brillient history .It is the first time for China to host the Olympic Games. That means China is becoming stronger and stronger in every hand. As a Chinese, Olympic means development to me.
With the motto "New Beijing, Great Olympics", Beijing promises to host a "Green Olympics", a "Hi-tech Olympics" and the "People's Olympics". Everyone is trying his best for the Olympic. I am looking forward to hearing the whole world's cheering for China and the diligent Chinese people. This time, Olympic means unition to me.
Olympic really means a lot, both to me and to the other Chinese peole. But all of us praies for the same thing. That is the success of the 29th Olympic Games in Beijing.

since 改 when ; but this year 没有转折错，改moreover 合适些；
award 不合适我认为，因为不是审判； China is a large country with a great deal of history 累赘，改为china is a large country with a magnificent history ; I am looking forward 后加to
China and the diligent Chinese people去掉china and 重复
同时好像olympic似乎没有奥林匹克精神含义，表项目，加s 也不对 。应该加the spirit of olympics好点
本人冒昧，不知对否 ，

全文如下,我按照你的文章改的,意思基本是你的意思,但这样符合英文的正式表述...有哪不妥,见凉I dreamed the Olympic Games would come to China when I was a little girl.Now the dream came ture.The 29th Olympic...