看看这篇六年级英语日记有没有错 或者意见Today was a sunny day.So,I went to play badminton with my friends after school,It was very good. The end,I was the winner,I was very happy. At about five o clock. I went my home,and do my homework. That was a good day. 写的很烂,因为实在没什么好写了. 还有那个o clock 那个撇 不知道怎么打 所以就没打了
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看看这篇六年级英语日记有没有错 或者意见
Today was a sunny day.So,I went to play badminton with my friends after school,It was very good. The end,I was the winner,I was very happy. At about five o clock. I went my home,and do my homework. That was a good day. 写的很烂,因为实在没什么好写了. 还有那个o clock 那个撇 不知道怎么打 所以就没打了
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还可以!!!!!
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Today is a sunny day.I went to play badminton with my friends after school,I play it very well.The end,I was the winner,I was very happy.At about five o' clock.I went home,and did my homework.It was the best day in the week.