请批改（5） A Letter to Friend 给朋友的一封信

请批改（5） A Letter to Friend 给朋友的一封信
Dear Tom :
　　How are you doing ? We haven't met each other for a long time. I miss you very much !
　　Look back the times we spend at elemetary school, how happy we were , and how norty you are !Last month , I met Mr smith, our math teacher. He has entired two years ago. His body looks well, and he ofter exercise dance with old people in park . How about your parents health ?
　　Otherwise(另外), I have something ask you. I'm taking a bussiness project , and come across some temprate difficout now. Could you borrow me twenty thousand Ywan ? The project has a brillint prospect , and will earn rich dividend . You will get much rewards . Can you agreement ?
　　Wish our friendship long live .


　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours Jack　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　December 27 , 2012

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