英语翻译我觉得我翻的怪怪的,帮我看看有没有错,错在哪,在帮我写一下对的 经过多年努力,他终于实现了当宇航员的梦想（dream)After working hard many years,his dream of being an astronaut finally came true.我个人觉得，好像逻辑主语不一致了，
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英语翻译
我觉得我翻的怪怪的,帮我看看有没有错,错在哪,在帮我写一下对的
经过多年努力,他终于实现了当宇航员的梦想（dream)
After working hard many years,his dream of being an astronaut finally came true.
我个人觉得，好像逻辑主语不一致了，
答
After working hard many years, he realized his dream of being an astronaut finally.
after working hard many years 的逻辑主语应与后面的句子一致。 多年的努力的逻辑主语应该是he ,而不是his dream。
答
Having worked hard for many years, his dream of being an astronaut finally came true.
答
应该没太大问题,不过去掉After好象更好,独立主格.
问题补充：我个人觉得,好像逻辑主语不一致了,到底对不对啊~~
我说的就是主语不一致,用独立主格.