Because I only got the train ticket back Shanghai at 13th afternoon请帮忙看看上面这话写的正确吗?

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Because I only got the train ticket back Shanghai at 13th afternoon
请帮忙看看上面这话写的正确吗?

Cause I only got the train ticket back to Shanghai at 1AM afternoon

Because I only (got>HAVE) the train ticket back (to) Shanghai (at>>ON) 13th afternoon

具体时间应该用ON。其他,就是不太地道罢了。应该没问题。

at 13th afternoon 〉〉〉 on 13th afternoon
I only got是很口语的,要写下来的话应该是
I've only got/ I have only got

不正确,应该是Because I only got the train ticket back to Shanghai on 13th afternoon
到某地应该加to,除非后面要加地点副词把介词to省略,否则不能省.
具体到某天的上下午,要用介词on

back 后加 TO
Shanghai 后加in

Because I only got the train ticket back for Shanghai on 13th afternoon