这句英语结构错在哪里
问题描述：
这句英语结构错在哪里
It's not a holiday,and when I do,just look what can you do,just had promotion of domestic mobile phone salesman find me,I hope I can do at the store promotion,after considering I to promise down.
答
典型的机翻!生硬晦涩.无法翻译回中文了.不如把你中文原稿发上来重新帮你翻译下了..这不放假了，也闲不住，就找找看能干点什么，刚好曾经促销过的某国产手机业务员找到我,希望我能在国美店做促销,考虑后我就答应下来Though I am in my holiday, I am not used to have nothing to do.When I want to find a short term job, thebusiness manager ofa homegrown mobilephone which I had ever been her sales staff contact with me .He hope that I could cooperate with him in the Guomei Shop .I agreed after consideration.
希望可以帮到你。