这句英语句子是否正确?

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这句英语句子是否正确?
As soon as he hung up,he went over to the workmen and told them that if a policeman ordered them to go away.
请问下这句话是否正确?如果在went前面加个had又是否正确?

有问题!
As soon as he hung up. he went over to the workmen and ask them whether a policeman had orderd them to go away~
不知道这是不是你想表达的意思!