请会写英文简历的朋友帮我看看写的哪里不对?1249 mailbox, South CampusHarbin University of Science and Technology,15008013251l@126.comR*** ZhangObjectiveTo contribute acquired administrative skills to a position which is related with English.Education2004.09-2008.06 Major:Foreign Trade English Harbin University of Science and TechnologyScholarships and Awards 2007 Third-class scholarship 2006 Third-class scholarship 2004 Second-class scholarshipCe
请会写英文简历的朋友帮我看看写的哪里不对?
1249 mailbox, South Campus
Harbin University of Science and Technology,150080
13251l@126.com
R*** Zhang
Objective
To contribute acquired administrative skills to a position which is related with English.
Education
2004.09-2008.06 Major:Foreign Trade English Harbin University of Science and Technology
Scholarships and Awards
2007 Third-class scholarship
2006 Third-class scholarship
2004 Second-class scholarship
Certificates
2007.6 BEC Priliminary
2007.6 CET-6
2006.4 TEM-4
2005.12 CET-4
English Skills
Strong ability of transition and oral English, basic knowledge about business and foreign trade English
Good ability of English writing
Know English knowledge about Mechanical ,Physics,Electric Engineering and so on
Experience
Working as an assistant translater in Harbin Fair for Business Negotiation this year, receive good evaluation from the compinies
Sales person in Suger and Drink Fair for Business in the year of 2007
English tutor in senior high school during university times
Computer Ability
Basic knowledge of computer operation, Skilled in use of Office, word, and E-commerce.
Self-assessment
Good communication skill, team work, a stable personality and high sense of responsibility.
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