My school

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My school
I’m a student from Da Xue Road Primany school.There are five buildings and a sport field.The teacher building is north of the sports field.The teacher corrects the students exercised in there.The dormitory building is east of the teacher building.The library is south of the dormitory building.The students can read and borrow books in there.The classroom building is south of sports field.The students can learn in there.The laboratory building is west of the sports field.There are lots of trees and flowers in the school grounds.It’s beautiful.
In autumn,the students may be arranged to have an outing.In summer,a sports meet is held.We are very happy.
This is my school.Welcome you to my school,anytime!

The students can learn in there.there是副词.应该把in去掉改正:The students can learn there.扩充:在last,next,this,that,some,every 等词之前一律不用介词Welcome you to my school,anytime!最好这样写Welcome...