大家帮忙看看我写的这句英语有没有错
问题描述:
大家帮忙看看我写的这句英语有没有错
Character
I have strong passion for the position of international sales.i am confident in myself,and i am sure i will do much contribution to your company.
答
I have strong passion for the situation(你想说形式吧,你的position多以方位,位置的意思出现) of international sale(不用加s).I am confident in myself,and i am sure i will make many contributions to your company.(对...做出贡献是make contribution to.做出许多贡献是make many contributions to...)