一篇关于“Planning for the weekend"的英语短文?

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I am going to have a wonderful weekend.My best friend invited me to her birthday sleepover,which will not end until Saturday noon.Then,I will spend the rest of the day hanging out in the mall with my cousin.On Sunday,we are leaving for the country to visit my grandparents.I haven't visit them for a long time and I miss them very much.I really look forward to my weekend
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OK,let me tell you something about my weekend.
I am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend.So I do my homework on Saturday morning.In the afternoon,I am going to do housework with my mother.Because I am a good girl,I am helpful at home.On Sunday morning,I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents.In the afternoon,we are going to the park together.Because there is a kite show.And my grandparents likes making kites.I think,we can see many beautiful kites there.And we are going to buy some beautiful kites,too.Then,we are going to fly the new kites,that’s fun.In the evening,we are going to have a big dinner.We are going to have fish for dinner.Because my grandparents likes eating fish.And my grandma cooks fish well.After dinner,we are going to watch TV together.We are going to be very happy.
This is my happy weekend.I like my weekend very much.What about your weekend?Can you tell me?
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