As you are fond of some color,so you are fond of life.

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As you are fond of some color,so you are fond of life.
As you have a passion for some color,so you have a passion for life.问下这两句有没有语法错误哪一句更好?或者怎么改

都应该把 so 去掉,读起来第二句更好一些