帮帮忙评一下英语作文我是初二的学生作文题目是health food good health

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帮帮忙评一下英语作文我是初二的学生作文题目是health food good health
I am pretty good I usually exercise My eating habits are pretty good I seldom eat junk food I like eating vegetable and fruit sure I hardly ever eat meat I like eating during I never drink coffee I sleep nine hours every night I believe that good lifestyle helps me study better
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I am health,because I usually do exercise.I have a good eating habits.I seldom eat junk food and I like eating vegetables and fresh fruit sure I hardly ever eat meat I like eating during I never drink coffee I sleepnine hours every night I believe that good lifestyle helps me study better.
亲,改成这样会更好吧,你写的很不错哟!
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