帮忙修改一篇350字英语文章 万分感激

帮忙修改一篇350字英语文章 万分感激
This morning when I came here,the road was so slithery that I almost can’t stand on my own feet.I took every step carefully but hard to conctral my balance.
Then,I met a friend who have already fell over herself several times,but when we walked arm in arm,magic happened,we felt as if the ice under our feet is no longer slippery.
That is 1 plus 1,and the result is obviously much more than two!
Well,it is ture that two individuals are equal two,but one plus one is more than two.Why?It has an plus sign between them,and the sign means combination,cooperation,communication and connection.
When a man meets the right woman,for example,does their combination just mean two persons?No,it means a family,and a family means generations of people,means endless love and responsibility.Forthermore,it might mean a historical family business,like Jiachen Li’s,Rockefeller’s,and Hilton’s.
One plus one,it creates something new and so big!
In business,if two exellent office clerks do the same thing separetly,they can do it well,but they may almost repeat each other’s work.But if they cooperate,they can not only do it in less time,but also bring out a better result.
One plus one can reparates each other’s disadvantages while expands strongpoints.Isn’t that much more than two?
In history,one create or find something new,maybe the relationship between the circle of the moon and tides,or the skill of survive in an earthquake,and another one practice it,better it,pass it on—and that is the base of cultural continuity and human civilization improvement.
1 plus 1 can extend something that was so dim within individual,and achieve something that single persons—no matter how many,can’t do on their own.It even creates something that doesn’t exist when two persons were seperated.
.Next time,if anyone ask me how to avoid tumbling in such extreme weather,I will tell them—go with a friend!Because 1 plus 1 is more than