我的家乡、我自己、我最喜欢的地方、 好的话加分.

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My hometown is Beijing the capital of China.It is in the north of the country.It's the third largest city in the country.It is a modern city but it is also a city of a long history.There are many beautiful places to visit,such as the Palace Museum,the Summer Palace,the Temple of Heaven,the Great Wall,the bird net,the water cube and so on.It is much convenient and comfortable to take a train,a bus and a subway to go around Beijing.There are many modern and tall buildings,shopping malls,hotels here in Beijing.I think my hometown is beautiful and clean.I like it very much.
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My home town is a beautiful place.It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town.Many people had no work.They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated.Since then great changes have taken place there.The streets have been widened.Factories,schools,hospitals,cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another.The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown.All the more I love its people.They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
你就更具自己的条件改一下就可以了