帮忙分析这句英文句子

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帮忙分析这句英文句子
Her dream when she started college was to become an imaginative writer.这句话有错吗,我认为 When 是连词 后面接be动词 这样正确?

对的句子,它的主句其实是Her dream was to become an imaginative writer.而when she started college是时间状语的,本应该放在最后的,为避免“头重脚轻”的状况所以放在了前面去了,这样呢应该懂吧!