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Thischart illustrates the different choices of accommodation in Evonia among threeage group 17 years old to over 46 years old.

In theage between 17 and 19, people are prefer to shared rental accommodation andhostel accommodation, which are accounts for 35% and 30% respectively, only 2%of people living in their own house. However, there are almost a quarter ofpeople who living in their own house, which follow the 36% of people who livingin own apartment. In the people who are 46 years old and over, the most popularaccommodation is own apartment with 33%, which was followed by own house with31% and then 20% of hostel accommodation. In addition, there are 13% of peoplewho living in assisted living, and the least popular accommodation is sharedrental accommodation for 46 years old and over people.

Overall,the graph shows that most young people don't have their own house, while themajority of middle-aged people and old people can buy their won accommodation.
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