We can see a girl on the shop.Do you know a name of the girl?Let's me to tell you.Her name is Han Mei.She is with her fr

We can see a girl on the shop.Do you know a name of the girl?Let's me to tell you.Her name is Han Mei.She is with her friend Li Li.They are hungry.Han Mei likes oranges very much ,so she asks for a bottle of orange.But Li Li don't orange.She like milk a lot,so she asks for a glass of milk.Now they are talking each other and drinking.They are have a good time.
有10个错误,请改出
话说……
“hungry”不可以改成“thirsty”么……
二楼的好一点
三楼的帮我发现了一个错误……
关于四楼，我把“Han Mei likes oranges very much ,so she asks for a bottle of orange.”翻译成“Han Mei非常喜欢橘子，所以她点了橘子汁”错了么
厄……
三楼四楼的筒子，到底talking后面应该加“to”还是“with”呢