英语口语考试 根据话题编写

In the collages,there are many students take part-time job.Some do it because they lack of money and want to mitigate their parents'burden.Also some want to increase their work experience to help in their future job.Everything has it't advantage and disadvantage.Part-time job has too.
We know that some students are poor ,they want to earn some money to help their study.So for them,taking part-time job is a good way .But if they take much more time in earning money,it must affect their study,as a result,this is disadvantage for them.Also,the reason of some people takingpart-time job is not to earn money,but to improve their work experience.Right,this is good.But the same truth,taking more time to do it will also affect their study.If they can't acquire more knowleage,even though they have much experience,lacking of knowleage will affect their job too.
So,I think taking part-time job is good ,but we should arrange our time reasonablily. Taking part-timewithout affecting the studying is the best way.
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