改错:1.Grandma and I go to a big shopping mall.2.We play a lot of computer game.

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改错:1.Grandma and I go to a big shopping mall.2.We play a lot of computer game.

go-went 或 go-are going
play-played

went
games

按表达习惯
I WENT TO A BIG SHOPPING MALL WITH MY GRANDMA
WE HAVE PLAYED A LOT OF COMPUTER GAMES

1.go 应该为went
2.play 应该为played
game应该为 games

1.Grandma and I go to a big shopping mall.1)这里用go很牵强,但是如果一定要用也不算错;最好是用went2)mall本来就有big的意思,再加big有点重复;如果实在要说明这个mall很大可以用huge或colossal参考:Grandma ...

还有 a lot of 应该改为lots of 会更好