英语翻译医生来后不久,就设法把我父亲的病控制住了.(Shortly after) 最好可以用定语从句.来写..

Shortly after the doctor came that he control the patients' condition of my father.

shortly after the doctor came ,my father's illness was controled

It was not long after the docter came that my father's illness deteriorated out of control.
Shotly after the docter came,my father's illness deteriorated out of control.
两种都可以

Shortly after the doctor came, my father's disease was under control.
My father's disease was under control, shortly after the dotocr came.