英语作文检查The computer is one of the most useful inventions.I think the computer has changed our life.We can play cames in the computer.We can study in the computer.We can listen music in the computer.Computer can help our studying .Computers can help our work.And computer can help our make friends.But computers can let our like play computer games very much.Sometimes computer is bad for us.But I think computer is good for us more than bad.I like computer
英语作文检查
The computer is one of the most useful inventions.I think the computer has changed our life.We can play cames in the computer.
We can study in the computer.We can listen music in the computer.
Computer can help our studying .Computers can help our work.And computer can help our make friends.But computers can let our like play computer games very much.Sometimes computer is bad for us.But I think computer is good for us more than bad.I like computer very much.
找点错误啊
第4行：help our work，这句话不应该这样写，这样的意思就是帮助我们的工作。应该是帮助我们做工作，help us doing work.
第5行：make 改为making
第5行：意思是电脑能让我们很喜欢玩游戏，can make us like playing computer games much.
第6行：接上前面句子的意思，应该加个so ,表示因此，有时电脑对我们不利。
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we can play games
we can listen to music
Computers can
And computers can help us make friends
But computers can let us like playing computer games
Sometimes the computer
But I think the computer does more good than bad
I like computers
computer 是可数名词.
play games不用in the computer,we can .by itlisten to musicComputers can.Computers can help us with our workAnd computers can help us make friends,though we may be addicted to playing games.Sometimes c...