英语作文句子~I‘m writing to complain about my air conditioner which I purchase in your store that it made too much noise when the maching operated 可以这样写么?
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英语作文句子~
I‘m writing to complain about my air conditioner which I purchase in your store that it made too much noise when the maching operated 可以这样写么?
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这句话太长，而且包含太多重句，可以分开，英语作文不提倡很冗长的句子，这个你们英语老师应该肯定跟你们说过，我个人认为改成，改成 i'm writing to complain about my air conditioner which was purchaed from your store. The reason is that it makes too much noise when it works.
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错了好多。。。。。你可以这样写The air conditioner which I bought in your shop will make much noise when it is turned on.
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将原句里的purchase in 改成purchased from,that改成because,when the machine operated改成when the machine is operating就可以了.也就是说写成：I'm writing to complain about my air conditioner which I purch...