短文改错 My hometown is Brighton where is not a very big town.It is on the coast about 50 mi...短文改错 My hometown is Brighton where is not a very big town.It is on the coast about 50 miles from London and has population of about 300,000.Of course it isn't as interested as London.But the air is a lot cleaner and good because there is little pollution here.There are a few factories in Brighton,but not many.As a result,that isn't very easy to find a jod here.M
短文改错 My hometown is Brighton where is not a very big town.It is on the coast about 50 mi...
短文改错 My hometown is Brighton where is not a very big town.It is on the coast about 50 miles from London and has population of about 300,000.Of course it isn't as interested as London.But the air is a lot cleaner and good because there is little pollution here.There are a few factories in Brighton,but not many.As a result,that isn't very easy to find a jod here.My father used to working in a steel factory which shut down a year ago and my father loses his jod.There are a lot of hotels and language schools in the town.On summer the town is full of traveler.My father has been decided to open a small gift shop.
where-which
interested-interesting
a lot cleaner-very clear
working -work
shut down-was shut down
loses-lost
jod-job
On summer -In summer
traveler-travelers
has been decided -decided
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1.where→which
2.has和population中加a
3.interested→interesting
4.good→better
5.that isn't→it isn't
6.working→work
7.shut→was shut
8.loses→lost
9.traveler→travelers
10.has been→has