The passage of time traces will be manifested in our faces.这句话有语病吗The passage of time traces will be manifested in our faces.这句话有语病吗

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The passage of time traces will be manifested in our faces.这句话有语病吗
The passage of time traces will be manifested in our faces.
这句话有语病吗

简单化一点吧: The traces of time will be manifested on our faces.