帮忙修改一下英语的句子和语法!when scientist change the tomato's genes,the tomato will become harder than the orginal one.will become这个用法对吗?

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帮忙修改一下英语的句子和语法!
when scientist change the tomato's genes,the tomato will become harder than the orginal one.
will become这个用法对吗?

对的。

个人建议:
The tomatoes will become harder than before by the scientists'changing to the genes.

这个句子ok啊!
后面分句如果用it做主语,第一眼看过去还以为it指带genes. 如果你不确定代词在这个地方make sense,还是用名词保险.

If the scientists change the genes of tomato,it will become harder then the original one.
可以用it will become ,变得。

Once the scientis change the genes of tomato,it will be much harder than the orginal one .