1,Is there any your friends or family members ,读起来不通顺,建议把your去掉.2,could you please go to the post office in the old address to check it out?表达不太好,不够清楚 (请帮我看一下这个核查合不合理,如果句子确实不通顺有问题,

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1,Is there any your friends or family members ,读起来不通顺,建议把your去掉.
2,could you please go to the post office in the old address to check it out?表达不太好,不够清楚 (请帮我看一下这个核查合不合理,如果句子确实不通顺有问题,

Are there any your friends or family members
这句话完全没有不通顺。但是觉得应该把is换成are
Can you please to check the old post office?
其实我没看懂第二句再说什么东西。但不应该有could把。could不是can的过去式么。。

1. Are these your friends or family members ?
2. Could you please go to the post office to check if there are any mails were sent to the old address?

1.Are there any friends or family members of you?
2.Could you please go to the post office to check if there is any mails were send to old address?