Just When I Needed You Mostyou packed in the morning,i stared out the window.and i struggled for something to say.you left in the rain without closing the dooe.i did't stand in your way.

问题描述:

Just When I Needed You Most
you packed in the morning,i stared out the window.
and i struggled for something to say.
you left in the rain without closing the dooe.
i did't stand in your way.

二楼翻得很好。最后一句可以再斟酌一下。
I didn't stand in your way.
我并没有阻挡你。这样,可以和题目呼应:当我最需要你的时候,你选择了离开,而我没有阻挡你。是我的爱还是我的怯懦成全了你的选择?没有明说,但是有那么点回味。如果翻成“我无法阻止你的离开”就少了那点余韵了。

Just When I Needed You Most
当我最需要你的时候
you packed in the morning
那天早上你选择离去
I stared out the window
我凝视着窗口
and I struggled for something to say
努力想要说些什么
you left in the rain without closing the door
你门也不关的离去 消失在雨中
I didn't stand in your way
我无法阻止你的离开