fanin was shy,some people very concern she.这句话对吗?

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fanin was shy,some people very concern she.这句话对吗?

首先,主语首字母应该大写,Fanin
其次,concern的正确用法应该是be concerned with sb,这里的she应该用宾格儿。her

Fanin was so shy that some people were so concerned with her.Fanin太害羞了,人们都很关心她。

不对,缺谓语.应该是Fanin was shy,some people were very concerned about her.