It is generally agreed that we need to pay more attention to the old at the present time.As the development of economy,the life span is longer than ever before,and as a result,there are more and more old people lonely staying at home,for their children are seeking their fortune outside homes and even far away from homes.So we should try our best to take good care of them.As students,we are ready to help the old in every aspect.For example,we help them

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It is generally agreed that we need to pay more attention to the old at the present time.As the development of economy,the life span is longer than ever before,and as a result,there are more and more old people lonely staying at home,for their children are seeking their fortune outside homes and even far away from homes.So we should try our best to take good care of them.As students,we are ready to help the old in every aspect.For example,we help them clean the house,and give the a good environment to live in,we cook good meals to celebrate their birthdays and so forth.What is more important,we communicate with them,let them loose what makes them unhappy,which in turn do good to their health,and make them less lonely.In my prospectives,being volunteers in old people's home is of great significance to every one.As for the old,they can have a happy life without their children accompanying them,as to us,we learn much from them through their witty stories,as to their children ,they can work whole-heartedly.缩短的七八十词,要求 意思还在

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当今人们普遍认为我们应该更多的去关注老年人。随着经济发展,人们的寿命有所延长,因为孩子们在外谋生,越来越多的老年人孤独生活在家中。作为学生,我们可以从很多方面去帮助他们。比如,帮他们打扫房间,可口的饭菜庆生等等。更重要的是和他们交流,让他们感到快乐,不孤单。这样也对他们的健康有好处。我认为,参加敬老院志愿者也很重要:对于老人,没有孩子他们也可以快乐生活,而我们可以从老人的故事中受益,他们的孩子可以全身心去工作。
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我们应该更多去关注老年,因为他们的孩子大多在外工作。我们学生可以参加志愿者,帮他们打扫房间,做可口的饭菜,跟他们交流。这样,老人没有孩子也不会孤单,我们可以从老人身上学到很多东西,他们的孩子可以全身心工作。

人们普遍认为,我们需要付出更多的关注到老在目前的时间.随着经济的发展,其寿命比以往更长,并且作为一个结果,有越来越多的老年人孤独的呆在家里,为他们的孩子寻求他们的财富在屋外甚至远从家庭.所以我们应该尽力照顾...