这句发员工的通知这样写可以吗:Please note that our company New year dinner at.Please note(还是用 come) that(还是用 to) our company New year dinner at Bingsheng Reaterant on 23rd (next Friday) on south of Hai Yin Bridge.Happy New Year!求教这样写可以吗?最后怎么结尾比较好?公司定于1月23日(即下周五)晚吃年饭，地点在海印桥南炳胜海鲜酒家，敬请参加。

Everyone,
Attention,please!
Our company's New year Dinner will be held at Bingsheng Resturant (South of Haiyin Bridge) on 23rd, next Friday. we are looking forward for your coming.

你把汉语写出来

we will hold our new year dinner party on 23rd (next Friday) at Bingsheng Reaterant
which is in the south of haiyin bridge ,we are looking forward for your coming.
我喜欢缓和语气的NOTIC ,如果只是单纯的把讯息传达 2号的就能明白了
您的那份里 如果要说"请记得"第一句要用被动 而且 INFORM比较好
还有一个介词 是 IN THE SOUTH
别的个人认为看的人应该也能懂的

Please be informed that our company's New year Dinner will be held at Bingsheng Resturant (South of Haiyin Bridge) on 23rd, next Friday.