请问这个句子有无语法、标点错误,非常感谢!Some of them state that…; while others harbor the view that…(准备在六级作文中用的~)

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请问这个句子有无语法、标点错误,非常感谢!
Some of them state that…; while others harbor the view that…
(准备在六级作文中用的~)

为什么要用 harbor the view 呢?
用hold the view 就很好啊,

应该用,比较好.如果你想用; 就用***;however,***