这句话对吗?Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.I'll try all my best to create more value for this most respectable enterprise.有错的或者不恰当的吗?
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这句话对吗?Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.
Thanks for your concern.It's a great honor to be an employee.I'll try all my best to create more value for this most respectable enterprise.
有错的或者不恰当的吗?
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没什么错。就是最好改It's my great honor to be a member of this enterprise..
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改成 create benefits比较好
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感觉是正是信函用,honor 后面最好加个for me
value最好加s 然后把for 改成 to
其他都很好啊
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我觉得第二句话可以改改
It's my great honor to be an employee here.