through this way ,we tell our ancestors we never forget them and miss them.请帮我看看这句话有哪些语法错误,谢谢

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through this way ,we tell our ancestors we never forget them and miss them.
请帮我看看这句话有哪些语法错误,谢谢

Through this way ,we tell our ancestors we (have never forgotten) them and( have missed them).
通过这种方式,我们告诉我们的祖先我们一直没有忘记他们,一直怀念他们。

通过这种方式,我们告诉我们的祖先,我们永远不会忘记他们,想念他们。

翻译:通过这种方式,我们告诉我们的祖先:我们永远不会忘记他们,而是想念他们.
改正:In this way,we tell our ancestors we will never forget them and that we will miss them forever.

楼上修改的第二个地方有点问题,加了have句意就变了,变成了“曾经怀念”。应为:Through this way ,we tell(改为told,因为是发生过的事) our ancestors (that)we have(加have,表示从未) never forget them and will miss(改为将来时,更合感情) them fowever(加上fowever,情感更重).
整体:用这样的方法,我们能告诉我们的祖先——我们从未将他们忘怀,我们怀念他们!