There is lots of bread here.I like some.哪里错了 I and my parents visited a farm last term 哪里错了

I would like some. 我要一些
would like 是要 想要的异地
My parents and I visited a farm last term
第三人称要放在第一人称前面 固定用法
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第一句，like改成need
第二名，My parents and I

There is lots of bread here.I 【would】like some.
My parents and I visited a farm last term.
第一人称与第三人称连用,第一人称在后.

There is a lot of bread here
My parents and I visited a farm last term